I have just finished reading the blogs of the people in my group. They were both really good. Rachel's was about traveling and Kristen's was about healthy foods and activities for college students. Almost immediately I thought of a ton of things that I could have done to make my blog better.
For starters I write tooo much! This is always a problem for me. Usually I can get away with it in my classes but I can't in a blog. I need to learn how to be more concise or at least organize my posts into shorter segments to make it look neater and be easier to understand.
Also, I need more visuals in my post. The only thing besides text that I posted was a link. Just because I don't mind reading long lengthy writings that have no visual stimulus doesn't mean that others feel the same way. If I want to keep the attention of my readers I need to find a way to post picture or videos that are related to what I'm talking about in that post.
It's still early in the week and I haven't gotten my evaluations for my clubhouse blog yet but I already have ideas on how I can improve it. This workshop has really proven to be helpful. It allows me to see the work of other, more experienced bloggers and provides me with concrete examples of how I can improve mine.
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